1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?
-a lot ot details
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give
your partner that will help his/her paper improve?
-sentences are way too long. Break it up a little
3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay?-sensory details and describing her feelings.
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
-it ended with a hook. she ended talking about her mom taking her to the doctor but didn't talk about what happend.
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